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What a behemoth of a subject to take on, hats off to you! The rising tension hooked me, and I appreciated the purpose behind breaking the fourth wall at the end.

I would love to see the final questions turned towards you, the author. How could you portray this character's ending or how his story will live on, whether it does more of a disservice or helps future victims?

Hopefully, this doesn't sound critical, I just found it inspiring and the writer in me got to thinking. Thanks for sharing!

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